Saturday, December 17, 2011

A Job With Benefits (An Erotic Short Story)

A Job With Benefits (An Erotic Short Story)A Job With Benefits by Valerie Honeycutt

My rating: 2 of 5 stars

I feel bad giving this just one star so I gave it two. I think the author was really trying. But damn. Take some writing lessons. This belongs on Literotica, NOT on Kindle.

I read the whole thing but I gave up on any hope of it being good after "tingle in the tip of his dick."

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