Bi-Sexual Threesome Adventures by Mary BreezewayMy rating: 2 of 5 stars
I found the writing to be very distracting from the plot. The plot had potential, but maybe I've read too many books lately and I'm becoming a snob. I don't know. This would have done well with a good edit. Read it and you'll see what I mean. Too many commas. He "shook his head yes." Really? I thought you had to nod your head yes? Things like this were scattered throughout the book.
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